Orthodox Love Poem by Vishal Sharma

Orthodox Love

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I am not a middle aged man
neither my thought is as such
I am the result of grief told with romance
and for praising beauty, i leave no chance
my love is orthodox, and i am paralysed,
never bothered to remove my ugly mask
and, you know my darling never asks
why am i so ugly beneath the beautiful face
and, i pat her forhead and give my love,
but remember, my love is not that orthodox..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Heather Wilkins 05 August 2013

a good write let me say I like the length of your poem sometimes I think poets repeat themselves to often. until their work becomes boring. I like this very much keep on writing.

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Melikhaya Zagagana 15 July 2013

you can always continue when you get a chance, other than that spot on. keep writing poet.

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Hazel Durham 15 July 2013

Interesting, original with great lines and thought provoking! !

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Payal Parande 14 July 2013

Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength, while loving someone deeply gives you courage.... amazing write with good choice of words...great job i am proud of you love didi

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Jenie Franksay 14 July 2013

u cud have elaborated it a bit. any way good write

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