Our Brush With Death! Poem by Michael Fischer

Our Brush With Death!

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Sounds dance on the ceiling,
spiraling downward, in the
flashing light of the unknown night.
Its diversion creates memories
and provides us with humor.

But death hides, in the darkness
of the flashing light,
while the light presents us
with only half the truth.
Our movements are flipbooks
of motion and the ocean walls
submit us to death’s judgment.

Cameras disobey every call
to return to us owners,
leaving us without evidence.
Our small tales have grown,
becoming simply tall tales!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chuck Audette 07 May 2007

this had a sureal/whimsical feel to me, not sure if I've ever seen 'flipbooks' in a poem before. -chuck

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Goldy Locks 14 April 2007

devouring. engrossing. completely absorbing. you know how to provoke a flow- can't wait to see what you do with it, Michael. furthermore, i respect your abolishment of ideals in your writing. slant towards the finite. the realistic. tragic. and penetrable mortality. care, sjg

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Michael Fischer

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