Palas Kumar Ray

Rookie - 213 Points (India)

Our Great Indian People - Poem by Palas Kumar Ray

Our Great Indian People have shown their great might
In millions of ballots they have written their will of right.

They have sent the message to the politicians smart
that people have much wide vision that can keep apart

pseudo king makers away from the power and how to bring
into the power an idol of aspirations a real would be King.

Our Great Indian people have spread the message very clear
politicians should be service minded and not a dirty player.

Our Great Indian people have again shown their great strength
which a mathepolitician will fail to measure by any unit of length

The flag of democracy is uphold all above here in our land
How glorifying and proudly unfurled! Come on see my friend.


[ this poem is my tribute to the people of India giving mandate
for a stable Govt. in the country in 2009 parliamentary election]



© Palas Kumar Ray.All rights reserved.


Comments about Our Great Indian People by Palas Kumar Ray

  • Rookie - 397 Points Indira Renganathan (5/30/2009 5:15:00 AM)

    A timely poem...each couplet is meaningful to accolade with a joy finally...excellent (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Kelvin Karani (5/29/2009 1:54:00 AM)

    I'm happy for the people of India, and I'm proud of you for celebrating their victory and immortalising it.

    I hope, come 2012, my people of Kenya will show the door to pseudo-kings and pseudo-leaders. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Yoonoos Peerbocus (5/28/2009 6:26:00 AM)

    deep thoughts expressed in your usual style/mature vocab (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sandra Fowler (5/28/2009 5:31:00 AM)

    'Great' is an adjective I would always use when describing
    the people of India. I have many irreplacable friends
    in this beautiful, ancient country.10, for you.

    Warm regards,

    Sandra (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Vaibhav Pandey (5/28/2009 4:32:00 AM)

    an excellent write palas sir......it was imperative for our counry's future to have a stable govt which can take decisions without being worried about political obligations...10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 80 Points Kesav Easwaran (5/21/2009 4:11:00 AM)

    well said Palas...you are right...most of the three legged dirty politicians have been thrown out by the Indian Electorate...good write yours...10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points Vidi Writes (5/20/2009 12:20:00 AM)

    When there is ultimate fall
    There comes a slow rise.
    There can't be a fall forever and forever.

    Yes.. People Of India...
    Kept up the tempo
    Lived upto the reputation of being democratic
    Gave a mandate for the cause of one and all.

    Timely... with good rhymes.
    Enjoyed the read. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 85 Points Sathyanarayana M V S (5/17/2009 11:18:00 AM)

    Indian voters are forced to choose the better out of the worst............Yes! A stable Govt. But as long as money and alcohol play a vital role in vote catching, we cannot say that our voters have matured. (If time permits please take a look at my poems Let us forget, professionals, Elections (haiku) (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,040 Points Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar (5/17/2009 2:39:00 AM)

    the poem gallops i share with you the thought (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mamta Agarwal (5/16/2009 11:43:00 PM)

    people of India, needed a lot of coaxing to come out and vote. Mumbaikars who were so indignant over terror attacks failed to keep their appointment with the country, a big shame. do we get what we desereve... yes and we deserve a stable government. We the people uphold the flag of democracy, a mere word in our politician's dictionary. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, May 16, 2009

Poem Edited: Saturday, June 7, 2014


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