Our Heart Condemns Us Poem by jim foulk

Our Heart Condemns Us

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Our heart condemns who we are.
Sharing our love with others.
Our heart shows what we are.
Selfish people are ones
whose heart condemns them
for who they are.

Taking from others, always
putting yourself ahead of everyone
your heart condemns you,
only a cold heart you will ever
have, until your eyes open
to see things clearly.

Our heart shows who we really are.
How we treat people. The way we feel
toward others. Our heart should show love
for every creature and human on earth.
Our heart condemns us for what we
have become.

wrote 4-24-07

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Who's Erwhatsit 24 April 2007

P.S. (I like your title)

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Who's Erwhatsit 24 April 2007

Some would argue that if we all were to 'show love for every creature and human on earth' that Utopia could still not exist because it would be boring. I disagree with that sentiment. It would not be boring, I'd just have more time to read more; -) Ahh...if only the 'should' of things could be the 'what is'. Nicely done, DK

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