Our Life's Journey Poem by Lyn Paul

Our Life's Journey

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Please...
Release the anger
Your hurting others
Purely
Because of your own pain
Realise
We all have our own
Our own pain
Aches, twinges
NO! .

Pain!
Pain, ... from Life...
From Life's Journey
Yet
We must know
Only you
Can deal with it
For it is your pain
You cannot share
Your Pain
You
Only You
Must deal with it
Hard it is
YES
Yet
You Must realise
That we ALL
Have our own pain
We have to fight it
For if we do not...
Your Life
Will Never Be...
Your Own
You, .. We, .. MUST
And we can
Survive
We will learn
And we will Gain
From surviving
Our Life's Journey







Copyright Reserved May 2014
LYN PAUL

Thursday, December 26, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: believe,hope,pain,selfworth
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 30 December 2013

We will learn And we will Gain From surviving Our Life's Journey Good advice. Thank you Lyn..

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Geetha Jayakumar 31 December 2013

Once again a Fantastic flow of ink from you pen, Lyn... Very true said, all have pain and only self only can fight pain. Conclusion with beautiful lines... We will learn And we will Gain From surviving Our Life's Journey! ! ! Wishing you too a Happy and Prosperous New Year in this Journey of Life! ! ! !

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Valerie Dohren 31 December 2013

Yes, we all have our own pain and we should not take it out on others through anger, but it is said that a problem shared is a problem halved, and we should all be there for each other to help each through his or her pain - this is what love is all about, but sadly sometimes it seems there is not enough of it as many are left to suffer in silence. An interesting poem Lyn.

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Dinesan Madathil 31 December 2013

Let us all hope our journey in 2014 will be a smooth one... Happy new year Lyn...

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 31 December 2013

dark and stark truth superbly penned!

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Rich in a realism that is both rich and refreshing. Well done my dear friend! All the best for 2016!

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Rubab Atwal 06 January 2014

How true, a person has nothing in his hands except hoping.loved it

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Valsa George 04 January 2014

All of us have our own share of cares and pain... A sad person can be an angry person at times! But it will only add to our pain if we let our anger out on others! We have to handle it ourselves, though at times, we may get help from others to get out of the tangles of life! But mostly it is our own task to solve the problems arising! A great write Lyn!

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Marvin Brato 01 January 2014

Fact is people hurt or inflict pain to to others because of their traumatic experience...maybe they want to share what pain is....but then nobody has the right to do it! Please face and resolve your own pain and let others do the same but never inflict pain!

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Hazel Durham 01 January 2014

Yes people can dump their pain onto somebody else and it is so unfair, we all have to deal with pain ourselves and to be kind is a way of letting go our pain! Great write and good advice! A Happy New Year Lyn with best wishes!

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