Our Love Poem by Donna Secrest

Our Love

Rating: 4.5


Like the rain her tears glisten

As the slowly slide down her cheeks

Keeping beat with her heart, first the left then the right

And across her breast, like dew gliding off of a rose pedal in the

early morning light

Dancing over her thigh like stars twinkling in the night

Coming to rest in a pool at his feet

Into the ground it soaked out grew a mighty oak

With trunk that parts and leaves like hearts

An eternity tree a symbol of the love between you and me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 29 October 2014

A lovely romantic poem, conceived by insight and written in poetic diction with conviction, to capture the bliss of love in the inner recesses of the poet's heart. A nice piece indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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