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Jordan Ray

Rookie (07091996 / Detroit, Michigan)

our love


I love you
and yet you
act like you
don't know
who i am

My love for you is
deep and warm like
the sun on the ocean
my love cares for you and
my love cares for us and our friendship

Your love for me is
crazy and unsafe to
go to
for what you hate the love for me
that you say is for me isn't safe or
there it is cold like a winter day
and dark like the wilds at night.

My love for you and your love for me
is hard to take from the tears of
pain.

Submitted: Monday, March 16, 2009
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