Bob Blackwell

Rookie - 0 Points (29/5/1936 / Wales)

! Our Sun


Our Sun
on edge
of world
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  • Rookie Sandra Fowler (1/4/2009 6:52:00 AM)

    I can feel the kind warmth of a winter sun as I read this. And warmth always has the power to take the shaow from our souls. Beautiful write.

    As always,

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Naseer Ahmed Nasir (12/27/2008 8:24:00 AM)

    Sun is lifeline for all living beings. Thank God it is free for all and there is no tax on it. Otherwise nothing is free in this corporate world. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Anjali Sinha (12/25/2008 12:35:00 PM)

    nice Our Sun
    you know in hindu mythology
    the sun is revered as a God
    as God Ravi. wonderful tribute
    to the sun God
    -10 anjali (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Bob Gibson (12/24/2008 10:09:00 AM)

    I can see your blood red sun just slipping below the horizon,
    its shimmering last rays cross the veldt, silhouettes of wildebeest
    casting long shadows, twilight takes over.
    lovely poem Bob (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Thad Wilk (12/21/2008 1:44:00 PM)

    A heartwarming poem (Our Sun) a delightful an radiant work of art! ! *10*! !
    Best regards Bob!
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  • Rookie - 183 Points Palas Kumar Ray (12/21/2008 10:30:00 AM)

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    You did'nt say the Sun but 'OUR SUN' which is again not afar but just very near on the edge of the world brings the mighty Sun so close.Your poetic vision shows us how motherly the burning Sun take care of us throughout the Clock.I feel the warmth in your poem.
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  • Rookie Mamta Agarwal (12/13/2008 10:46:00 AM)

    cues from celestial kins- such a lovely poem- our Sun on edge of world signals days rush has finished- but who pays heed. a very fine message Bob. i love the poem and the way you start it.10

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  • Rookie Min Sia (12/13/2008 7:24:00 AM)

    A sun..who saves our day..lights us..despite the shadows behind us..

    Nice concept..fine imagery..poetic...

    A masterpiece! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 3,090 Points Is It Poetry (12/13/2008 7:12:00 AM)

    Most powerful thoughts to I does this bring warmth o spring..Thank you most kind..Sir.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Kesav Easwaran (12/13/2008 6:40:00 AM)

    a 'sun'ny poem...'moon a lightened mirror' is wonderful poetic phrase..refreshing and pleasing write, Bob...10 (Report) Reply

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