* Out Of The Box * Poem by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

It brings itself to a short and simple point there is such a fine line between success and failure And it is true sometimes you can move mountains with money. but i guess it depends on the mountain. I like it Lauren

his is one sad, but realistic view of our world. If you have money, you can... Don't let me even start counting. It is beautyful. Bravo!

so bright is the illusion of man's treasure....a poem of fully loaded with reflection...denuded by total surrender of quest....very beautiful poem... God bless...a 10 +++

rich and poor vary in needs but only the amount varies rich need big amount while poor needs less.... what matters most? ...money.....o, don't question my words here my SMY...winners are rewarded, ranks will tell what to win.......aaaaaaaaaa....my dear, do u think this poem is a simple one? ..no, it is complicated since many poetic are seen here in abstract details....u can delet this anytime if it sounds not gud....smileeeeeeeeeeeeeee

The title's ironic.

Maybe you can write again...after so many years....I still wait for..your poetry

Hi... Although this poem is simple, it does have a deep meaning - so lovely poem...

A very intelligent write and spectacular closure.

poem ends with a need that is power for any action.......meaningful and marvellous

Filled with a much insight..truths..i like it^^