Outer Beauty Poem by Amber Kangas

Outer Beauty



Her eyes sparkle
in the sun
her hair flows down
in the breeze
revealing her
soft skin
skin as smooth as silk
her smile makes you
smile back
makes you want
to be near
makes you feel as if time
has suddenly stopped
that girl
is me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kate Ram 28 August 2009

aw... this is a REALLY great poem. :) It's happy which is amazing. :) Good Job. -Katelyn.

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 17 April 2009

the outer beauty is exquisite.. but i see ur inner beauty on this poem.. even ur heart is on this very poem.. u R immaculate =)

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