Outstanding Daddy Poem by v.m.saraswathy munuswamy

Outstanding Daddy

Rating: 5.0


We were the planets in an orbit
You were the sun my daddy but quit
We all suffocate to fall
You gave deep chasm by your sudden crawl
We in agony to shatter and suffer
You in rage gave us numbness forever
We weep in sarrow and grieve
You in heaven with the time to weave
We lost you the treasure in greedy
You are an outstanding inspiration daddy.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Outstanding inspiration my dad
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 02 June 2016

We lost you the treasure in greedy! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Daddy my super hero, love u and miss you, thanks EKL to understand my inner feel, love but take care, thanks

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Ratnakar Mandlik 13 April 2016

A beautifully conceived glowing tribute to an outstanding dad. Thanks for sharing.

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Thanks you received it well

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