Over My Heart. Poem by Fay Slimm

Over My Heart.

Rating: 5.0


I reach for your core of warmth
................................. with fond dreams.
They lift you lightly
................................... into my keeping.
Large loads float weightless
................................ within your verses.
Many there melt
......................and become burdenless.

Holding you soul-close
................................. my spirit survives.
Time cannot enliven me
................................... like your rhymes.
If this be love
.............. then love transforms partings.
Breathe then your gold,
................... dear friend, over my heart.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lady Grace 12 September 2009

this is nice and appealing..well expressed..

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 07 September 2009

soothing and romantic...very nice poem to read...10

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Carl Harris 03 September 2009

Your words in this beautiful poem soar with wings of passion, Fay, and treat the reader to a sensuous feast of your impressive poetic skill in writing such enchanting love poems. You always excell in romantic poems and in adding a touch of sensual side of love only enhances them wonderfully! Carl.

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Carol Gall 02 September 2009

wow so beautiful and senuous 1010

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Sandra Martyres 02 September 2009

beautiful romantic poem Fay....'If this be love...................................then love transforms partings' lovely words indeed 10

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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