Overw8 Dave Pt.6 (2009) Poem by David Joel Rodriguez

Overw8 Dave Pt.6 (2009)

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Oh my lord, what have I done wrong
Living unfaithful diets sustaining a ton
'Thinking of adipose rhymes for savy poems...
thinking...of excess buttery pork loins'
Another fat year being in a fat mood
exploring the world for different foods
Ballooning up just about every single day
devouring daily with fat monolithic steaks

With such fat stress seemingly going around
whining again and again writing about pounds
arteries clogged; fluctuating HB Pressure on the move
It probably could skyrocket any moment to the moon
So I hear myself again for two-thousand nine
Wheezing and living another year, feeling like swine

Comments:
Did I cause a Fat facial expression?

~Refer to the poem, '10 My Weight Discussion With Dave~

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