Oxygen Low Poem by Dave Alan Walker

Oxygen Low

Rating: 4.7


Starvation of the brain
oxygen low
Makes your mind take you
to another life

Family not dissimilar
voices sound familliar
but faces just seem to simulate

Starvation of the brain
oxygen low

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lovable Wisdom 22 May 2012

I think it has feeling the description leaves u to wondre pass the title itself

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Heather Wilson 11 May 2012

I like this thought, I think I get low oxygen from time to time, a nice poem and description.

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Unwritten Soul 06 May 2012

Very nice, but here come and take this oxygen tank......is it enough? ? ? need more hmm i will try other tank in hospital and diving place hahaha_Unwritten Soul

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Eric Cockrell 05 May 2012

feed the mind... feed the soul! very good.

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