(p) 6 (Sufiyana) The Veil Poem by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean

(p) 6 (Sufiyana) The Veil

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Bathed in radiant light
Moon kissing my every pore
I sit still.....
Intergalactic silence
But my vision is veiled

Whispering mist
Willows at the riverbank
I stand still.....
Pure white snow envelops
And my vision is veiled

Surrounded by tranquil sea
Glorious light sanctifies
I swim still....
Irridescent corals reaching out
My vision is still veiled

Flying in soft clouds
Angel of sweet delight
I fly still.....
As if in vacuum
My vision is still veiled

Given up the worldly race
Now I only write
Still with my quill.....
Jasmines are warmed by my words
But my vision remains veiled

I come across You
Whirled into ecstasy
The bird has flown from its dark cage
And I sob
And I laugh
And I see!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Charles Garcia 23 January 2008

your bird is welcomed to my outdoor aviary nice write charles garcia

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Nimal Dunuhinga 24 April 2007

What a lovely poem Tranquil? The captive bird unveiled and opened its cage, flew to the barren sky?

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Original Unknown Girl 24 April 2007

Love this TO, so very lovely, though those last 3 lines, wow you socked those to me, never saw them coming! Great piece. HG: -) xx

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