For a reason I give this intention of no worry
Never swim, but lay against the current...
Live this on going, unnoticed change in my perception
Strong willed when I fight for neglection
Have a familiar impression on those all around me
A hole of remembrance branded into their skin...
Leave their souls with a grin
Come on and take a look with me
What do you see?
Perfection inviting us to come have a taste?
The first bite may be a little bitter...
But I have a package of sugar to welcome my entrance
The key is our invisible acceptance
Its the matter forever surrounding beyond the senses..
Gain enough to my support to pull down all of their fences
Very intelligent and very clever. Reminds me of the saying 'You win a man's heart by his tummy' But then it switches to something more loving.Great JOB!
I really like this poem and it shows warmth of happiness and you sound very dedicated to your poems. keep them up
For a reason I give this intention of no worry Never swim, but lay against the current... good lines. good job. Becca
' our on goin walk ' with a package of sugar for anyones interested? Nicely written Drake.keep it up.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Sort of like walking in steps