Package Of Sugar Poem by Drake Kinkaid

Package Of Sugar

Rating: 5.0


For a reason I give this intention of no worry
Never swim, but lay against the current...
Live this on going, unnoticed change in my perception
Strong willed when I fight for neglection
Have a familiar impression on those all around me
A hole of remembrance branded into their skin...
Leave their souls with a grin
Come on and take a look with me
What do you see?
Perfection inviting us to come have a taste?
The first bite may be a little bitter...
But I have a package of sugar to welcome my entrance
The key is our invisible acceptance
Its the matter forever surrounding beyond the senses..
Gain enough to my support to pull down all of their fences

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Poewhit 12 November 2008

Sort of like walking in steps

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Estrella Baldemosa 12 November 2008

this is a clever way of winning people. good write

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Very intelligent and very clever. Reminds me of the saying 'You win a man's heart by his tummy' But then it switches to something more loving.Great JOB!

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Kayluh LaMonte Davis 12 November 2008

i Love This Poem Hun: ]

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Lisa Bray 14 November 2008

wow that was good thanks for shearing :)

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Tissa Calvert 17 November 2008

I really like this poem and it shows warmth of happiness and you sound very dedicated to your poems. keep them up

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*Trusting You* 16 November 2008

For a reason I give this intention of no worry Never swim, but lay against the current... good lines. good job. Becca

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 14 November 2008

' our on goin walk ' with a package of sugar for anyones interested? Nicely written Drake.keep it up.

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Heather Hill 14 November 2008

This is really good keep it up! ! !

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Kaylee Questionable 14 November 2008

this is pretty good I like it Superb job yo!

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