Pain Poem by live to die

Pain

Rating: 5.0


Pain is like
a fire
the more you feel pain
the fire gets bigger and bigger
you feel worse and worse
until you look at your life is
just a lie
when you should trust no one
your like a puppet on a string
letting people control your life
you should stand up for yourself
so kill your puppettear goodbye
and your not my master anymore

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Arabian Heart 23 June 2008

pain something i know both emotional and physical since i was young and if you felt it you know the fire never leaves a fire i hate but know so much

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Riquetta Elliott 11 January 2008

I feel the same way because I don't want nobody to control me and my life. I don't want that to happen NO NO NO NO! ! ! ! So when I read your poem again and tell myself, I will be stronger. You are a true poet and I rated your poem a 10 because people can relate what your going through especially me. Don't stop keep on writing.

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Linda Weischedel 02 January 2008

Trevor: Don't give up on life now, you have an awesome talent for writing. I understand how you feel, I deal with deamons in my head everyday having Bipolar-1 Disorder. Don't give up man! ! HUGS 2 YOU, Linda

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