Pain Poem by Emi Raye

Pain

Rating: 4.8


My heart is broken
And I can't bear
With this pain
I wanna die
With this pain
My heart is bleeding
Inside I'm hurting
But outside
I'm cying and screaming
How could you put me through this pain?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Troy Clark 28 May 2008

I liked it, thanks for sharing with us! ! !

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Jurietta Duraan 18 May 2008

Well, I promise you that it gets better. It is a good effort and good to start with shorter poems like these... think of images that can describe the feelings you have and weave them into your poems and you will see how practise makes perfect! ! ! Don't stop writing. Yuri*

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Howard Johnson 16 May 2008

This write is one 'raw' show of painful emotion, Thank you for sharing, Emi

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