Pain Poem by pallvi sharma

Pain

Rating: 5.0


All our dreams can’t come true,

All the tears can’t flow,

All the pain can’t be shown…

and all the facts cant be told.

For al the fears which became fate,

And al the feelings which cant be named.

For al the love I didn’t appreciate,

And al the feelings I couldn’t explain.

For all the actions which left me confused…

Neither am happy nor sad,

My heart can’t be tuned.

I lost the love through which my soul was fueled…

Time has passed away,

And am still standing here…Lost and confused…

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Yaseen Anwer 12 December 2008

Dear Pallvi i must say its really adoreable Regards Yas

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 02 December 2008

Varied emotions expressed wonderfully. Loved this poem. Thanks.

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Dr Kamran Haider 27 October 2008

Here you have come up with a much better piece... Truly expressed... Keep up the good work... Regards, Kamran

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Kesav Easwaran 16 October 2008

a good write on mixed feelings of love...of happiness and confusion...welldone, Pallvi 10

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Neha Aradhye 15 October 2008

one thing can be said - somethings better be left unsaid.... nice one.. :)

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