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Pain

Sitting alone, in a dark pit in Hell

I am waiting for that pain I know to well

that ice down my spine,

that fear that grips my chest,

That pain i know the best

I want to run,

I want to hide,

but i have to much dumb pride

I sit alone and just let my tears slide

down that mask of deceit

that pain I never wanted to repeat,

broke away my perfect mask

that shell,

that skin,

that was only a cast

the pain got to me

that pain turns to chains and bind me

and I sit alone, but i just want to be free

Submitted: Sunday, November 23, 2008


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  • quercus : I've never got paid for my hits... (11/23/2008 9:38:00 PM)

    It's noting wrong with wanting to be free - better be free and alone, than in a company of somebody who wouldn't let you be who you are...
    Pride isn't a dumb thing, in a way it is close to moral excellence, such as honor...
    It is self respect and awareness of self - worth.
    I think we shouldn't mistake it with stubbornness and being pompous...

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  • Shalyn Caraballo (11/23/2008 9:27:00 PM)

    wow, i love it! ! ..great poem! !

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