Pain Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Pain

Rating: 5.0


I am in pain so dejected,
In raging mood and feel rejected,
Why all my work so objected?
When it has in no way connected?

I love, wonder and care,
Never ask who is he and from where,
Do whatever is in my control,
Though I not in anybody’s pay roll,

Always put self behind and think,
Weep with emotions and sink,
Kind to other’s sorrow and not blink,
Their tears wipe out my feeling in ink,

Almost ready for certain collapse,
Never an opportunity miss or lapse,
Put my whole heart and share the grief,
Even my association with them brief,

I did not go for fame and money,
Never had I jumped on tree like monkey,
Still people made me fool and donkey,
Thought I knew success lies with the key,

I reel under pain and cry,
All good work but bad name why?
Do they not feel shame and shy?
Or it should be taken as mere imply.

I wanted little satisfaction and joy,
All took me fool and tact’s employ,
So I think its all finish and over,
People only search shelter and cover,

No need to go for full drive,
They need more and only connive,
Their lust and greed never end,
More and more even if you send,

So I am in pain and feel sad,
Never in life had I felt so bad,
Not even at the word’s of dad,
But feel let down by my lad,

I feel like to withdraw,
Never a line parallel I draw,
Continue to work as resolved,
Even if problems not solved

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Santoksingh Jadeja 14 August 2009

when result is not yielding....10

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Vinod Karmakar 14 August 2009

whennothing comes out of it....10

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Saroj Davde 19 August 2009

when ur work is not appriciated....10

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Kamli Kamal 19 August 2009

pain giving whennor given proper due...10

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a mesmerized pain! it touched my bottom... Nno LIFE without PROBLEM, no PROBLEM without SOLUTION... relieve your pain... a beautiful poem I liked it...

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Pami Panchal 21 November 2009

I am in pain so dejected, In raging mood and feel rejected, Why all my work so objected? When it has in no way connected?

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Chetna Purohit 20 November 2009

I am in pain so dejected, In raging mood and feel rejected, Why all my work so objected? When it has in no way connected?

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Bhanubhai Montu Shah 07 November 2009

love, wonder and care, Never ask who is he and from where, Do whatever is in my control, Though I not in anybody’s pay roll,

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Ketan Rajgor 22 October 2009

I am in pain so dejected, In raging mood and feel rejected, Why all my work so objected?

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Ramdulari Sinha 18 October 2009

I am in pain so dejected, In raging mood and feel rejected, Why all my work so objected? When it has in no way connected?

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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