Pain Poem by Anna Tetu

Pain

Rating: 5.0


Pain is what you’ve caused me
For too many years
I was left crying in the rain
With so many doubts and tears
It was no game, you knew this in
The beginning but you insisted playing with my soul
It was broken enough but you just
Left it cold…

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 20 December 2009

Anna, I love your poem, brief, but it says all, well penned, you got my vote10+++(if you have time, please, read my poems titled 'A LOVE'S GAME', 'A LOVE'S DESIRE' AND 'IN PURSUIT OF HAPPINESS' and you will realize that in different ways, we all go through this experience)

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Laura Anne 20 December 2009

So true, wonderful write..

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