Pain Poem by Alex Rodriguez

Pain



Pain is like a knife
Cutting you in a half
Blood everywhere
You just want to die
I take a minute to think
What I have done in life
I was nobody so why not commit suicide
One day it’ll be Freedom everywhere
I wonder if heaven and hell are real
If I commit suicide one day
I just want to you know
I end my life to fly and be free.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Robin Machorro 06 June 2010

very emotional really well writen i think everyone can relate to this at some point in their life ... i cant wait to read more of your poems

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Lindsay Birch 26 March 2010

good peom, well worded. great descriptions

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