Pain Poem by Vivek Sharma

Pain

Rating: 3.5


THE SWEET MOMENTS I SPENT WD U,
THE PRECIOUS TYM I SPARE WD U,
THE FEELINGS OF AFFECTIONATE I GOT FRM U,
ALL LUK LYK A XPERIENCE OF DECADE..

SINCE THE TIME U LEFT ME ALONE,
NOW ALL I HAVE CRISIS OF LOVE,
ALL THE WAY U R IN FRONT OF ME,
STIL DISTANCE LUK LYK
TWO OPPOSTE BANKS OF SEA,

I DID'NT DO ANYTHNG WRONG,
YET U UPSET ME,
NOW I AM BOUNDED TO THOSE LOVABLE MOMETS,
WHAT I AM GETTING FRM HERE ND THERE, ARE COMMENTS,

THE TASTE WITH OUT U IS BITTER,
THE LIFE WD OUT U IS INFERIOR,
NO WORDS TO DESCRIBE THE PAIN,
BUT REMEMBR ONE THNG,
IF ANYHOW WE WIL MEET AGAIN,
I WIL ASK ONLY ONE QUESTION, ONY ONE QUESTION...
'WHAT WAS MY FAULT'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Neetha Sasidharan 01 May 2012

isn't it AN XPERIENCE...or is it cuz u started it wid X? ? ? ? grt poem....gud rhymes.....kp writing..

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