Pain~life~death Poem by Elena Sandu

Pain~life~death

Rating: 4.5


Mortality, a joy for those who go
for those remained, just sorrow.
Pain is the life's bread,
Sometime we need it, let's accept.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 01 September 2013

Somehow i agree with this, but again we still have time to back to life before we really die..hahahah_Soul

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 01 September 2013

I am fully agree the blithe Soul Unwriten nice burst well done thank u

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Geetha Jayakumar 01 September 2013

Beautifully expressed in few lines....Mortality is really a joy and sorrow for those who remained... We have to accept the challenges to keep our life moving...Very true said.Loved it.

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 04 September 2013

Great poem with great wisdom dear Elena. Siya_! !

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Louis Cecile 07 September 2013

Such a true reflection on mortality. The strong honesty makes the poem.

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Luz Hanaii 22 May 2019

Wisdom shown in this inspirational poem, succinct and lovely. 🌹 Big 10+++

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Marvin Brato 18 September 2013

True that death is inevitable, life is finite...musty accept it! Thanks for sharing.

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Marvin Brato 18 September 2013

TRue my dear, life is finite on earth but for those who believes in Jesus...there is a Kingdom prepared for the believers in Heaven! Death is inevitable Thanks for sharing.

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Rekha Mandagere 16 September 2013

It is a thought provoking poem Elena, morality is a thing of joy for those who go and for the rest it is sorrow. What a question in this really confusing world. Brilliantly placed your thought into action.I love this piece Elena: -)

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Danny Draper 15 September 2013

And yet if that bread Is sliced and silent And in the silence the freshest And sweetest Of all fruit Could the tree Have known That sweet silence?

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