Pain: Wher Were...When... Poem by lola hi l

nice poem, so here is my big Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!

i like it............represents us our life nice work

I feel your pain but your poem was not a pain Nice 10+

I feel your pain but your poem was not a pain Nice 10+

i liked this poem so much i wanted to make a second part to it.. comment me.. if you like it.. i will make a part 2 to anyones poem title - Wher were...When - the boy part baby don't be shy with me anytime & anywhere you can stand right beside me.. Sorry i said Hi.. walked away like i said bye but sometimes when i see you i get shy too Sorry i wasn't there when you first cried im sorry for the bad times that was my crime but i promise i be with you & promise ill never leave you baby...

i realli like this one.. what i like to do with these poems that sound like your talking to a boy i like to make a second part to this.. & like answer you as the boy.. can i try it?