Painful Parts Poem by Mister LPTD

Painful Parts

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the most painful part about losing your heart,
Is not your silence but that was the start.

the most painful part without you by my side,
is not your absence, but that weakened my pride.

the most painful part about loving you still,
is not my expenditure, nor absence of will.

The most painful part about you being inlove,
is not the fact, it's not me you think of.

the most painful part, the worst of them all,
is not missing your company, nor no recieving a call.

but reliving our story, thats played again and again,
having all of this love and knowing he's your 'best friend'.

Wednesday, December 2, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love and friendship
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 02 December 2015

The loss of love manifests multiple thoughts and feelings. Thanks, LPTD

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Lydia Cadby 02 December 2015

this reads out beautifully! well done, a truly fabulous poem :)

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Shakil Ahmed 02 December 2015

you have painted your feelings very well in the poem, thanks for sharing

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