Painting Poem by Marieta Maglas
Painting
I'm drawing a circle,
Which is concentrically diminishing,
With each gliding of the pencil on the paper,
Until it becomes a spiral.
I'm drawing the line of your oval eyes,
Which is concentrically diminishing,
With each winking of yours,
Until it becomes only the memory of your sight.
I'm drawing the line of your elliptical lips,
This beauty of your lips,
Which is dwindling concentrically
With each whisper
Until it becomes only the memory of your word.
I'm drawing your great feeling,
As a noble heart,
Which is eccentrically enlarging,
Until I can touch you
To become one soul.
Beautiful verse you have created here Mari with your concentric circles diminishing as the poem comes to life...10+++
From: Dona Lil Antonio (Manila Philippines; Female; 29) To: Marieta Maglas Date Time: 10/19/2009 12: 19: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: hi ive gone through your poems they were all awesome and written in deep feelings. keep writing and keep inspiring others to make good crafts as well.
you could simply draw a funny painting.. i like the way you use your words/brush.. i will read it again and enjoy it more.. thanks4sharing! !
Diminishing concentric circles rising high as a spiral to spiritual state by the touch of love!
Romantic Geometry in befitting metaphors Say Wow! ... thanks for sharing Hon’ble Poet Marieta Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10
Wonderful poem... I really liked the symbolism Thank you for sharing
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I would like to translate this poem
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Diminishing circle and his spiral face Diminishing eyes, so is the wink on his face Elliptical lips and his irresistible words Enlarged heart stands a witness to union of souls. No wonder, such an inspiration has brought out this poem Smooth, silky feelings and paintings have drawn a forum Good read.