ray Schreiber

Rookie - 4 Points (Mechanicsburg, Pennsylvania USA)

pantoum - to near perfection


on sandy beaches with no wind
gentle sunshine warming skin
turquoise water topaz skies
periwinkle shaded eyes

gentle sunshine warming skin
perfect summer days begin
periwinkle shaded eyes
blocking sun and hiding lies

perfect summer days begin
on this spinning rock time flies
blocking sun and hiding lies
on sandy beaches with no wind

Submitted: Thursday, May 27, 2010
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