Paradise Poem by Pradeep Dhavakumar

Paradise



Everest carved to hollow cone
Floored with finest beach sand
Stars grouped to a sparkling moon
And moon made to a table lamp

Wind gently waking baby rocks
Flowers like lovers hugging tight
Bamboos and brooks tuning chords
Peacocks rehearsing wedding dance

Clothed with rainbow, in peace I lay
Satiated by breeze of infinite joy
Infused with rivers of rejuvenating hope
Blessed with rays of vitalizing love

To Paradise! I go, whenever I lay
On father's shoulder, mother’s lap

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nibedita Deb 28 July 2006

A very nice approach to the poem makes it charming. I like the transformations you show in this work: this to that and that to this. Specially this line read so sweet: Stars grouped to a sparkling moon...The last line made it all complete. Nibedita Deb.

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