Paradise Is Now. Poem by Fay Slimm

Paradise Is Now.

Rating: 5.0


Tranquility, following peace,
Every day's dawn increasing
The sense that I'm loved
Gives sublime feeling, overrides
Hurts of the past, abiding
Inner excitement
Collides with delight, enlightened
Sensual images fire
My mind with desire.
Could any paradise better
The one that I stumbled upon,
The one that is Now?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fiona Davidson 12 April 2009

Paradise is there in the simplest things of life...great write Fay...10++

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Viola Grey 12 April 2009

sounds like a beautiful place to be...truly sublime....nice write.

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finding tru love.. U go FAY! ! hehe

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 12 April 2009

u expressed it so smoothly and eloquently

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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