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Paradox Of Time

Through the paradox
of time
I walk a fine line
from one world to the next

Only I will know
when it's time to choose

Submitted: Friday, December 16, 2011
Edited: Friday, December 16, 2011


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  • Jacqui Broad (12/23/2011 2:33:00 AM)

    Terrific poem! You are right, the choice are ours alone. Good or bad.

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  • Ramesh Rai (12/19/2011 10:09:00 PM)

    nice perception, likely to be adopted

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  • Wahab Abdul (12/18/2011 2:35:00 PM)

    what can I say I give you for this poem 10

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  • Craig Anderson (12/18/2011 11:02:00 AM)

    A veritable Time-Lord. Deep and inspiring Dave.

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  • Siyabonga a Nxumalo (12/18/2011 7:46:00 AM)

    superb poem Dave, thought provoking indeed.......

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  • Cosmic Dreamer (12/18/2011 6:31:00 AM)

    In a universe of unknown's it is amazing that we are able to choose the right path... Very thought provoking write...

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  • Munnan Misra (12/16/2011 8:01:00 PM)

    Good going - M. Misra

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  • Greg Uhan (12/16/2011 1:51:00 PM)

    Love it! So many thoughts inspired by such little text! I believe art, such as your poem, goes along way in promoting the unity between spirit and science.

    well done.

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  • Vijay Sai R (12/16/2011 5:24:00 AM)

    great theme..nicely penned

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  • Vipins Puthooran (12/16/2011 4:29:00 AM)

    'Tis a phenomenal poem!
    Thought-stimulating! ! !

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