Parallel Life Poem by Dave Alan Walker

Parallel Life

Rating: 5.0


Do I live
a parallel life
Do I see
the other life
through these eyes

Is that me
or is this me
Who am I
me or him

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hebert Logerie Sr. 05 February 2012

That poem is short but it has very deep meaning. Good job. Keep it up.

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Ramesh Rai 06 February 2012

i agree with frnd Hebert

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Wabi Sabi 06 February 2012

you are right about this insight of life, which always makes me feel like chasing so-called dreams. ^^ thanks for sharing!

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Marlene Rashidi 06 February 2012

Beautiful piece.loved it((:

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Silentpoet Grl 06 February 2012

Deep, thought provoking... Great work!

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Cristina Teodor 18 February 2012

A poem that is touching depths of mind, a challenge for brain. Beautiful..Cristina Teodor

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Renu Kakkar 17 February 2012

we have a higher self, a lower self and the middle self....but most tend to become the lower selves..when we should aspire to become the higher selves...the middle self is a balanced self and the higher self is a spiritual one..nice poem..makes one think

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Ruth Walters 11 February 2012

Some do say we are all living simultaneously in other universes on other earths, but slightly differently where we make slightly different choices etc., Yes it sounds strange but Brian Cox, the famous scientist, said as much on T.V.

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Vipins Puthooran 09 February 2012

who am I? .......'tis an unanswerable question......So many devoted their life to answer this question...but none could.... Thought-provoking poem! ! !

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Eric Cockrell 07 February 2012

'who am i? ...', the question that opens the door!

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