Parallelism Or Clear Nights Poem by Tsira Gogeshvili

Parallelism Or Clear Nights

Rating: 4.3


… Then will begin a clear nights …
But nights will be as a spark-instant,
And such unique as self-destiny,
Then you'll eternally grieve about it,
You'll start to catch up obstinately,
And all your attempts will be to vain.
And this gallop will last for a long time.
Also you will not get tired there never.
You'll eternally awake for catching this infinity.
And eternally you will be unsatisfied...
But your dream will be alive
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Then will begin a clear nights …

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rema Prasanna 22 June 2008

And you eternally awake. And eternally you will unsatisfied... And your dream will be live....... finishing lines of this poem gives a definite thought, a well balanced one A very good composition

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Kesav Easwaran 23 June 2008

'...you will not get tired there is no time...' this line is an insightful interpolation...a beauty of its own...10

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Catherine Rica Cosico 26 June 2008

perceptive in its own way...A unique work with such brilliance in its simplicity... Cate

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 10 May 2009

A meaningful poem about woven beautifully.Pathway to clear nights.........

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 15 November 2008

When all haze that clouds our minds eradicated, clearer nights would beckon and shimmer, entertaining jubilant life.Excellent writes Tsira!

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 04 September 2008

and bright days wil begin...10

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Kris Smith 04 September 2008

Tsira you astound with your insight, a real feeling of inner self, portrayed with a golden pen Thankyou Chris 10 Please keep yourself and family safe in these troubled times

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Adel Jons 30 June 2008

Oh! When i have read this poem i feel pleasure, becouse i remember that night in my city L O L

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