Parousia Poem by renato mascardo

Parousia

Rating: 5.0


to see
the second advent
nearing its end/

to think
eschatologically
of death/ judgment/
new eden/ gehenna/

to hear
the hoofing of four horses/
of one cloven-hoofed beast/

to watch
the legions of dark/ clash
with choirs of light/

to feel
the lightness/of a thousand
years alight/ upon a green earth/

to know
you no longer/
as a friend in this new order/

it makes me
more/ than
just a little sad//

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 30 June 2011

Great poem with a very strong structure. Nice sentiments and imagery. Voted 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and vote my poem 'A busy street' on page 1. Regards Akmal

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