i lived in the past for so long
that the present was always unknown.
now i always look ahead at all the possibilities
and there is so much, that i now see.
a shimmer of light at the end of the tunnel
and my thoughts being poured through a funnel.
the past is the past, and that's where it will stay
and in the present, we have to find a better way.
for the present will soon be our past
and if we don't do something, it will not last.
we must always look to the future
for it is only twenty four hours away
then it will be our past
and we have so much to do and say.
when i look at life, i truely have to laugh
today is our future and tomorrow it'll be our past.
now that i have you confused as to what i am
trying to say.
i guess i will try' to put it a better way'.
we all tend to procrastinate
always leaving it for tomorrow.
but! what if you don't see tomorrow.
and today you did'nt accomplish that task
how will you be remembered
if the present you left for last.
when we leave this material world
and our souls soar up in the sky
we will still have our memories
and that we can rely.
for when we get up there(if we do)
your soul will have carried all that you did
in this life
and the memories of friends, family
husband, or wife.
now when you look down on all that you had did
and asking yourself the question.
did i use my time, the way it was
meant to be?
or did i procrastinate, that others now speak of me?
we all have to work in order to survive.
but we must stop on occasion to smell the flowers.
and to enjoy all that we was given
otherwise how can you call this living.
(my thoughts: the words and stories were given to me.
so that i could write them down, for al the world to see.)
this is my philosophy.
A beautiful write. We tend to live in the past and waste the precious time in wasteful activities. thanks for sharing...............10+++
Hello poet Louis. I enjoyed your insightful, philosophical poem. Well done! Loyd
i lived in the past for so long that the present was always unknown. now i always look ahead at all the possibilities and there is so much, that i now see..it is sign of great visionary that he thinks of past, lives in present and plans for tomorrow..... lovely concept.. i liked i t. read mine yes to to...what abt tomorrow
Great piece to share Louis my friend.....I just wish I got to read this poem years ago.....excellent work 10
First thing you did a great job in this write. Secondly it was not confusing, you made it really simple to follow.The philosophy of your is good. Wish to see more such lines from you my friend. Wonderful paint you had painted in my mind with this beautiful theme.
I just loved the argumentative manner in which you expressed yourself.. very much like a lawyer proving his case in a court room! ! ! I am sure jury will agree with you.. I will send how I feel via mail... But this poem is always an exhilarating read. I love when people express their view in such argumentative manner.. good...10++ lov shan
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
nice philosophy.. i agree.