Path Through The Pain Poem by allan macli borges

Path Through The Pain

Rating: 4.9


The earth changes every minute beneath my feet
From the deep arise mountains that I can’t reach
I feel the swallowing whistle of the hurricane
As the ground opens below tearing down my blame
The man who lives misnamed the wind is calling
While the walls grow up from the deep sea
The stars are shooting down and the sky is flooding
The eye of the hurricane stares deep on me
In the unrest lookup my eyes had got a hash
Turning around so hasty... could I forget my past?
The ghosts that follow me never have a doze
Avenger angel’s steps in the shadow tapping
Offering to me a cup of my inner thoughts
But I cannot swallow it without gasping
Nothing compares to the weight I’ve brought
Dissipate the mist for me to see the ending
Of this dreary and dull path that I must walk
That takes my soul into the sleepless land
The sun of equator burns over my prettiest sins
Where I made my ponderings seated on my free will
That one that falls into uncountable pieces through the trail
I have no longer gain by follow these streams
Maybe I drown into my vanity as Narcissus finished
The day the embrace of Nemesis shall come over me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sathyanarayana M V S 25 September 2009

Very thick feelings interwoven with vivid images. A great poem

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Eyan Desir 25 September 2009

Apoetic piece witha good flow...10s

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Eyan Desir 25 September 2009

Apoetic piece witha good flow...10s

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Eyan Desir 25 September 2009

Apoetic piece witha good flow...10s

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Anjali Sinha 25 September 2009

very profound but sad lovely poem surely a tenner from me anjali

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rago rago 29 September 2009

a beautiful write and metaphoric present is very very fine.....

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Chitra - 28 September 2009

a poignant write filled with emotive value..indelible!

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Kesav Easwaran 27 September 2009

poignant and introspective...one can observe very much soul searching inside there...good work Allan...10

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Marieta Maglas 26 September 2009

nice metaphorical poem, very well written.....10+

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Kristina B; Williams 26 September 2009

vey intense..great write..10+

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