Paths Poem by nots andi

Paths

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Narrow and board paths are roads
which, will you follow?
narrow crosse or broad jinx
broad manoverous gruff way or,
........narrow menancing crosses
crosses will lead you to broad love path
into destiny not to disbelief
hurdles in narrow cross will biuld,
you to destiny
buddy, broad will lead to gruff bed

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kee Thampi 28 October 2008

crosses will lead you to broad love path into destiny not to disbelief hurdles in narrow cross will biuld, you to destiny buddy, broad will lead to gruff bed good to read, write more for us

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Shyam Balaji 29 December 2008

hye lad..! nice piece of poetry...am amazed with ur usage of vocabulary! ! >...keep wriitng.@@..good luck! ! >. pls read ma poems nd comment on them wen u find tym..take care>!

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Shyam Balaji 29 December 2008

hye lad..! nice piece of poetry...am amazed with ur usage of vocabulary! ! >...keep wriitng.@@..good luck! ! >. pls read ma poems nd comment on them wen u find tym..take care>!

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Kite Remedy 08 November 2008

face what is before your eyes.. it's your roads, your destiny.. simple, but thoughtful.. keep on writing, my friend..

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Autumn Baker 03 November 2008

I like this poem. Keep them coming. =D

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Ravi Sathasivam 03 November 2008

Welcome! You have written a nice poem. I like it Looking forward to read more of your poems near future

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