Some Girl

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Patience


I waited a lifetime
for someone to hold
I was patient and
learned what i was told

you came from no where
and at first i watched you go
then you stopped and looked
just as i was told

you made me laugh
you reminded me to live
you gave me a hope
that i had love to give

i waited a lifetime.

Submitted: Thursday, September 01, 2011
Edited: Saturday, August 17, 2013

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  • Bronze Star - 6,058 Points Khairul Ahsan (10/10/2013 11:52:00 PM)

    A wonderful poem. Touched me.
    'you made me laugh
    you reminded me to live
    you gave me a hope
    that i had love to give'
    Heart warming feelings, heart enchanting words. (Report) Reply

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