Patience Is The Key Poem by asma bahrainwala

Patience Is The Key

Rating: 3.9


Though life is a creased cloth,
It can be
Ironed out.

Though life is a confounded pickle,
It can be
Sorted out.

Though life is a spider’s web,
It can be
Straightened out.

Patience is the key
If you
Want to live.


8th September 2006
Asma…

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nalini Hebbar 08 September 2006

great words of wisdom asma...great going...love...nalini

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Preeti - is here! 15 September 2006

Wise words from a fabulous poet...keep writing Asma! Preets

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Aldo Kraas 05 January 2007

Yes asma You got that right patience is the key

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Abdul Sattar 09 December 2006

Patience is the key to success! good thinking Asma. Nice to read this poem!

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Raghavan Warrier 24 November 2006

It is easy to write a long poem full of words. It is very difficult to write one like this and still be able to communicate. Great technique.

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Shivapriya Surve 19 November 2006

'Confounded pickle'...a curious similie! I like it for its candid expression and profound philosophy!

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Peter A. Crowther 27 September 2006

Clever: a neat, concise and polished poem! Good write!

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