Patience Which I Find In Women Poem by Aftab Alam

Patience Which I Find In Women

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Patience which I find in women, find no where
They are the holy earth on this earth, is it clear?
Love existed in many forms, motherly love, uniform
For rich or poor or moderate, love, that never harm

Whenever, I parted off, found, ocean of love, on her
Eyes, her do’s and don’ts do’s annoyed me, but I
Knew and felt and controlled my dew, complete blur
From the world except her face, worth to love to die.

Women is the core element of the family, a boon
A love hub, a heavenly power house, hug, lub-dub.
Mother Mary a symbol for women in this universe
Why can’t we behave like Jesus, refer holy verse

Patience is the womb of silence, we must remember
And heart is the universe that keeps love and slumber//

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pardaz Sheikh 28 September 2013

Patience is the womb of silence...nice slogan

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Heather Wilkins 30 August 2013

women are the hub of the family (along with a strong husband) they are the home maker care taker money manager chef the mother wife counselor trainer teacher and lover a lot of responsibilities for one person. your poem depicts these things well.

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Sallam Yassin 30 August 2013

patience and peace in the womb in the women the life we found/ great piece for the mother and her love

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Gajanan Mishra 30 August 2013

heavenly powerhouse, wonderful, good write.

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Geetha Jayakumar 30 August 2013

Beautiful poem with deep meaning...especially the words. Patience is the womb of silence... So many beautiful description you have given, I feel some positivity..Loved reading it.

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