Paused Prayers Poem by Aman Saa

Paused Prayers

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And all of sudden,
with a tender movement
in the waves of the sky
and colors of passing time
you come close.
I hear your breath,
in and out as you
I live in your life.
I live for this invitation
that in reality changes its sight.
That in reality strides aside.
Today may all prayers be paused
Let me share the gleam of silence with God
and let us reach to a conclusion
of our debates on love and war.
And that how faith stands in ruins
and He is made in clay.
This moment everything turns easy for me,
An ocean even seems to be less in my eyes
I can narrate gospels in few words
I can sing all sonnets in lay man's notes
I cry out loud
'they, they and even they speak but only of love'
'that those who have not heard this day
shall hear some other day'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Wahab Abdul 21 November 2012

very beautiful poem........... i liked it

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The Reader 09 November 2012

This moment everything turns easy for me, An ocean even seems to be less in my eyes I can narrate gospels in few words I can sing all sonnets in lay man'notes, it's obvious to note you don't only compose poetry but also create its atmosphere as well. There is a strange combination of human senses so poetic, so figurative -where Time has colors, and sky has waves, where breath is to be heard, where the silence has its gleams, yes, you have the ability to narrate Gospels in a few words...keep writing! ! !

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 07 November 2012

A wonderful poem with poetic similes! Enjoyd reading.

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