Payroll And The Obedient Servant's Redress Poem by nimal dunuhinga

Payroll And The Obedient Servant's Redress

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His name was not in the paymaster's list and the whole wage has deducted for his food & lodging.
Where he goes to compensate?
He sleeps under the huge thorny money tree
But the bitter fruits are not ripen yet.
Though he waits for the coming season
Yet he has to re-validate his torn season-ticket.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 19 March 2008

Frustration and impatience underpin this plea for equal distribution of wealth in the world. Strong words penned with style. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sandra Fowler 13 March 2008

The shadow of hard times to come falls across the lines of this sad poem. The old saying, 'What cannot be cured, must be endured' comes to mind for some reason. Write on, my friend. Warm regards, Sandra

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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