Peace Of Mind Poem by Tirupathi Chandrupatla

Peace Of Mind

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Noise
Around me
Was disturbing
I thought
About this
Over and over
Then
One day
I packed
My minimal
Needs
And set off
To a remote
Place
Crossing forests
Reaching
A mountain
Secluded
Silent it felt
With an occasional
Growl
Period of silence
Felt
Unbearable
Sudden sounds
Creating shock
Again noisy
Surroundings
Seemed to feel
More homely
Inviting me back
And I returned
To where I was
My original
Place
Peace of mind's
Where you are
I concluded.

Wednesday, January 15, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: mind
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 16 January 2014

The other side seems greener always! .....You shifted to a place remote, as you found the noise disturbing! But later you realized it were better to have been in the place, you came from! Often such realizations come late in life... Fortunately for you, the realization dawned upon you quite soon! Enjoyed! !

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