Peace Of Mind Poem by Rebecca Springsteen
Peace Of Mind
The messages tell me sooner,
then my mind, it keeps on going low and lower.
Music is the only words I can understand, because here
my mind can't seem to understand anything ever.
The people seem to get further and further,
away from me, I think it's harder
for them that my bearer,
doesn't hold as much words. The faster
they speak the less larger
my mind is. It seems duller
then I remember, maybe the doctors made an error.
Everyone keeps on getting louder and louder,
just like the water in my head, the river.
I can't tell you what the season is or the weather.
it's an emotion conveyed very beautifully... Music is the key I find here.. its straight connected to a life of a common person stressed in daily activity... an Music gives such a relief.. Music is what the mind understands.. Thanks for sharing.... Keep writing... i think you should have a 10 from me
Why thank you Ryson, for those kind words, and finding your meaning. And I'd take a 10 from you any day! Don't worry, I'll always keep writing! -Rebecca :)
A moving poem, I don't know much about the academic side of poetry but this works for me ☺
Hi Rebecca.. as a young poetess, you should join a project called ''Poetry Against Terror - Student Edition''.. think about it.. And keep on writing/posting! Cheers
Thanks, again for reading my poem! I'll make sure I check into it. -Thanks Rebecca
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I would like to translate this poem
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Music is the only words I can understand, because here my mind can't seem to understand anything ever. mind, , brain, intellect, faculty of thought. hands, abilities.. illnesses.. situations. lovely and painful. all these thoughts i derived from your lovely poem. thank you very much. tony