scorching sun above
undulating waves below
in between the vacant me
as my eyes extended
their vision on this
monsoon afternoon
the sea turned
into one sprawling
peacock feather...
22aug2009
15.10hrs
What a glorious vision you have had Indira and am grateful to share it with you. love Karin
Exceptional image. We share our garden with a pair of these exotic beauties and they never cease to stun me with their beauty. I can see your sea - magnificently! Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
From: Brett Ackerman (Colorado Springs United States; Male; 44) To: Indira Babbellapati Date Time: 8/26/2009 1: 49: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Re: a peacock-feather sea Now that's a colorful metaphor. Your mind is unfolding like feathers it seems as wrote this.
Nice poem presenting beautiful visuals.The glittering waves, producing peacock-feather like patterns, is really an arresting spectacle...Missing the sea a lot! ! !
after reading your lovely poem, i am wishing to go to the the seaside and rerun your imagery
vivid imaginative and crisp... a superb combination of style wit and poetry a superior write cheers and ten
Great imagery Indira. Just touching heart, where it has to.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
imagery.....imagery....imagery...........awesome. thank you.