Peacock-Feather Sea Poem by indira babbellapati

Peacock-Feather Sea

Rating: 5.0


scorching sun above
undulating waves below
in between the vacant me
as my eyes extended
their vision on this
monsoon afternoon
the sea turned
into one sprawling
peacock feather...

22aug2009
15.10hrs

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarvesh Kulkarni 24 August 2009

imagery.....imagery....imagery...........awesome. thank you.

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What a glorious vision you have had Indira and am grateful to share it with you. love Karin

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Sandhya S N 25 August 2009

Your imagination is wonderful mam.. regards sandhya

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Alison Cassidy 25 August 2009

Exceptional image. We share our garden with a pair of these exotic beauties and they never cease to stun me with their beauty. I can see your sea - magnificently! Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Indira Babbellapati 26 August 2009

From: Brett Ackerman (Colorado Springs United States; Male; 44) To: Indira Babbellapati Date Time: 8/26/2009 1: 49: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Re: a peacock-feather sea Now that's a colorful metaphor. Your mind is unfolding like feathers it seems as wrote this.

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Ranjit Ravindran 30 September 2009

Nice poem presenting beautiful visuals.The glittering waves, producing peacock-feather like patterns, is really an arresting spectacle...Missing the sea a lot! ! !

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Ratnaprabha Raykar 25 September 2009

after reading your lovely poem, i am wishing to go to the the seaside and rerun your imagery

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Saadat Tahir 02 September 2009

vivid imaginative and crisp... a superb combination of style wit and poetry a superior write cheers and ten

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 02 September 2009

lovely imagery...lovely vision

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Sathyanarayana M V S 01 September 2009

Great imagery Indira. Just touching heart, where it has to.

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indira babbellapati

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visakhapatnam, india
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