Perfect Love Poem by Savannah Gabrielle

Perfect Love

Rating: 5.0


Finding someone to protect your heart
To hold you when you're down
Like a kid that is so smart
That they are holding a crown

Loving you like you're a queen
Spending on you till you drop
Nice and precious like the birds sing
Having faith your love won't stop

Love is wind
Love is the sky
Our love is like a new trend
That we hope to have till we die

So sweet, sharing, and shinning like an elderly person
Wanting, wonderful walk of life that never will worsen

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem is about my Love and I. Elijah Washington has been the most amazing God Fearing guy to me since we became one. I love to write poems about our love because God has blessed us with a Good relationship. Amen. Also, my english teacher Mrs. Genesis Adams had us write a poem for Valentine's Day. The poem had to be written like a shakespearen sonnet. The critera for the poem was 4 similies,2 metaphors, and 2 parts of Alliteration.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valerie Dohren 14 February 2013

Sweet poem Savannah, well written.

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