Perfection Poem by Clive Culverhouse

Perfection

Rating: 5.0


when I look at a bird
in a tree
the first thing
I notice is
its colours
are
within the lines

Monday, September 23, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Clive Culverhouse 09 October 2023

Another comment from PoetrySoup - 'It is a great observation and a short and sweet poem.'

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Clive Culverhouse 08 October 2023

I put this poem on PoetrySoup, here's a comment 'that's an interesting thought. Never thought about the bird's colors are within the lines. A nice read.'

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Mahtab Bangalee 23 September 2019

with the colors birds on the sighting line!

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Clive Culverhouse 23 September 2019

Thanks for supporting my work with your words, always appreciated., , , .

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