Perfume 'Alarm' Poem by David Darbyshire

Perfume 'Alarm'



As she walked through the door
the perfume filled the room
everyone turned their head
how could they ignore

the perfume that she wore
was a little hardcore
everyone swore
she wouldn't get in any more

on the secound floor was a back door
so she dared to come in for more
I think she is going to do some harm
So some-one Please pull the smell 'alarm'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Francesca Johnson 24 May 2006

A little dab of something classy behind the ear works well for me. But I had a good laugh at this poem - I can imagine your lady with something cheap and cheerful splashed liberally all over her, and the reaction of others! Love, Fran xx

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Esther Leclerc 22 May 2006

Omigosh, I hear you loud n' clear and I'm smelling her from here! ... Why, why, why do women (and not a few men!) wear their scent so 'loudly'? ? ? Gag... Why wear perfume when the scent of clean(ish) skin is the best nature has to offer? ! Cute poem, Dave!

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Patricia Gale 22 May 2006

Funny Dave, good one! Patricia

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Goldy Locks 22 May 2006

hahah. David, very good comic relief write.

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