Treasure Island

D.M. Sita

(December 22 / America)

Permanent


A promise is like a tattoo
Permanent
Once you make a promise
Permanent

Removing a tattoo is painful
Permanent
Breaking a promise is even worse
Permanent

The pain you feel
Permanent
The broken hearts
Permanent

The guilt
Permanent
The sorrow
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The darkness never leaves your soul
Permanent
The broken trust
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The friendship gone
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How can you live with yourself
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You're gone
Permanent
So am I
Permanent

I'm coming to get you
Permanent
I'll make you pay
Permanent

Let's see what you make of this
Permanent
Die
Permanent

Submitted: Monday, April 08, 2013
Edited: Wednesday, October 09, 2013

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Poet's Notes about The Poem

Basically in this poem I am describing the feeling one gets when he/she breaks a promise, or the feeling the one you made the promise to feels when you break it
The moral of this poem is: Don't break your promises
or don't make promises you can't keep.

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