D.M. Sita

Rookie - 20 Points (December 22 / America)

Permanent - Poem by D.M. Sita

A promise is like a tattoo
Permanent
Once you make a promise
Permanent

Removing a tattoo is painful
Permanent
Breaking a promise is even worse
Permanent

The pain you feel
Permanent
The broken hearts
Permanent

The guilt
Permanent
The sorrow
Permanent

The darkness never leaves your soul
Permanent
The broken trust
Permanent

The friendship gone
Permanent
How can you live with yourself
Permanent

You're gone
Permanent
So am I
Permanent

I'm coming to get you
Permanent
I'll make you pay
Permanent

Let's see what you make of this
Permanent
Die
Permanent


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Basically in this poem I am describing the feeling one gets when he/she breaks a promise, or the feeling the one you made the promise to feels when you break it
The moral of this poem is: Don't break your promises
or don't make promises you can't keep.

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Poem Submitted: Monday, April 8, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, October 9, 2013


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